We found this post both comical and enlightening, as Dani and Zoe, our survivalist characters, are frequently SUPER frustrated. Enjoy!
Frustration: Your
Novel’s Best Friend
By: Angela
Ackerman
You're thinking
that title must be a typo, aren't you? It isn't, I promise. :) Frustration
is awesome.
Sure, as writers, we want NOTHING to do with this emotion. Between critique partners ripping the
guts out of our manuscripts to form rejections to a book review that compares
our writing skill to that of a lobotomized hamster,
frustration awaits at every turn.
We develop coping strategies to avoid it: pep talks before opening email. Chugging
Diet Dr. Pepper by the six pack. Sucking on the sweet innards of M&Ms,
pretending each one contains a Muse's orphan tears and gives us writing
superpowers. *coughs* What, you don't do that? Erm, yeah....me neither.
So, on the keyboard
side of things, frustration
sucks. But on
the page? MAGIC.
Frustration-that hair-pulling, chair-kicking
delight-is what drives our novel. It juices our plot, makes our
characters twitchy and unfulfilled, and glues the reader to the page. Keeping
characters from their goals creates Frustration (AKA Tension, the Heartbeat of a story).
So while WE try
to avoid this emotion, it's important we make sure our CHARACTERS don't. In this state a character reveals
who they really are. Frustration is emotional GOLD, forcing them to ACT, which pushes the
story forward.
Of course, no two
people express their Frustration the same way, and neither should characters.
Understanding their Emotional Range (how they express
emotion and to what degree)
is key to creating believable emotion.
When up against a wall, a character might:
Retreat inward
Run from the
problem
Try to
manipulate/influence
Give up
Get angry
Vent out loud
Cry
React with
violence
Feel depressed
Lay blame
Seek revenge
Take out anger on
others
Berate themselves
Ask for help
Analyze what
happened in hopes of understanding
Fall into a
bottle, feed an addiction, drink orphan tears
Act like it
doesn't matter
Bounce back &
try again
Do Reactions Fit the Character?
A hardened
criminal character isn't
going to ask for help or have himself a weepy moment. A skittish,
shy teen isn't about to rant
and rave in the middle of the school, and I doubt a kindergarten
teacher would whip out her
AK-47 to get her rage on. These things don't belong in the character’s Emotional
Range.
Who our characters are at their core-their
values, their sense of self, their confidence levels and insecurities-dictate
how they behave. The
hardened criminal is gonna get himself some revenge. The timid teen might blame
himself or simply retreat inward. Our kindergarten teacher would rethink the
situation and maybe ask for help. Or jump back in because of the try, try again
conditioning she promotes in the classroom. These reactions fit
their personality types and
so are believable to the reader.
So the next time
you're frustrated as a writer, sit your butt in front of the keyboard and
write. Pass it on to your characters and your book will thank you for it. :)
And if you need
more suggestions on how to express a character’s frustration, check out
Angela’s book, The Emotion
Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression.
This resource comes to the rescue by
highlighting 75 emotions and listing the possible body language cues, thoughts,
and visceral responses for each. Written
in an easy-to-navigate list format, readers can draw inspiration from character
cues that range in intensity to match any emotional moment. The
Emotion Thesaurus also
tackles common emotion-related writing problems and provides methods to
overcome them. This writing tool encourages writers to show, not tell emotion
and is a creative brainstorming resource for any fiction project.
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